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PostSubject: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Thu Apr 02, 2009 12:36 pm

Poetry is a way of life, a flower
Which developes, grows and slips to death.
Oh god, how much I wish this day
To not remember all I've lost, I wish
To forget, to sleep, to rest once more
Lay down, let it slip Concussion
Would be a blessing, more dead than alive
I've lost the three people, how I loved
And one more, but just six months.
Its not long, half a year to the day
And to me your death was just the start,
Hey, honey, do you look at us now?
See the way my princess cries and weep
For her darkened face reflecting through a pane
Of glass, the raindrop rivers tears down her cheeks.
This is her life now, this bitter existance
Awaiting your return with bated breath, but
Knowing its hopeless, you'll never return
From the void, you're in a better place But she
Will always wait, looking through
Her pane of glass, the sun comes out
A rainbow forms and her face lights up,
Becomes beautiful, fills with the light, is happy.
Thank you honey, for all you've done, the rainbow
Your last present for her, you know she loves them
It reflects through the pane of glass and onto
The sleeping figure, illuminates her face
She smiles in her sleep and turns over
And thanks to you, your little rainbow
She is happy, smiles through her pane of glass
Thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:59 pm

I like it! Depressing, yes, but still really good! Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:30 pm

thanks sean Smile it was one of my faves which i've done... i'll post more later but cleaning and working on a fanfic atm







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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Fri May 01, 2009 11:30 am

why have you put such a depressing poam i though this site was supposed to be a happy site
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Fri May 01, 2009 11:31 am

allen this is in the "depressing poems" forum silly







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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Fri May 01, 2009 3:24 pm

Aw, I wanted to point out that obvious fact... Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Tue May 05, 2009 9:03 am

right so i didnt know that
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Tue May 05, 2009 5:02 pm

hmmm... allen? READ THE TITLE OF THIS FORUM XDD







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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:32 am

that is a really good poem!! and it would be stupid to have a happy-poems only rule sad poems may make you depressed but people have to express their feelings somehow...sad poems is one of them ways
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:27 pm

Happy poems are just poems.. there's something more about sad poems. They're more meaningful then poems in general. So yes, it would be stupid to have a happy poems only rule here. Anymore coming along soon Sammy?
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PostSubject: Re: rainbow coloured pane of glass   Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:38 pm

Wow sad poem very depressing Crying or Very sad
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